This is take 3 of our opening of our short film. Since the second take, there has been changes we have made such as adding close up shots of the actress and how she feels. We have added these close up shots at least 3 or 4 times throughout the 2 minutes to make sure the audience gets a hint at whats going in.

 

One of the things I would change about this is to maybe have all of the credits all on one page which would make up less time so we could get more footage into it so we know more of whats going on. I think this because at the beginning, the credits all come up on seperate blank screens which I think looks good because they all come on at seperate times, but on the other hand, it takes up to much time which isnt good.   

 

Another thing I would say is that we could turn the music down on part of the film just so we can hear them speaking or laughing so we know that at a time they was happy and there was no problems between them. I think this would work well because it would engage the audience more to whats happening rather then just hearing the music over it.