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Draft two synopsis:
This is my second draft of my synopsis. This draft is also too short to use as we havent added the right information in. I need to add more about the situation that is happening rather then just saying how the character is feeling and how she got like that.
I think that this is a more better draft then the first one as we have tried to explain what is going on in her situation more. In draft three, I will have to explain in even more detail what is going on because for a synopsis to look good, you need to have the right information and tell the audience what exactly is going on and not just how they are feeling because everyone doesnt know what the story is.
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